Go, said the wind to the little girl, standing on the shore. Don’t be afraid. Go, the water is calm and I am at your back.
I am a good swimmer! said the child, But it looks so far. What is out there? What is on the other side?
Who knows? said the wind. Maybe there will be other worlds to discover. Maybe you will find treasure. Maybe love. You will meet others along the way. Maybe they will know.
YOU know, said the girl, and laughed at the wind, but I will find out.
And
in
she
dove.
A moment, or a thousand years passed, and she came to the other side. Weary now, she dragged herself ashore and sat in the sun, grateful for the warmth.
Why didn’t you tell me? asked the old woman of the wind. I am a good swimmer – but you lied. You were not always at my back. Sometimes you blew so hard against me that I nearly drowned.
There were other swimmers, said the wind, who needed me at theirs.
There were other swimmers. Some were with me for a short time, others much longer. We would try to hang on, but even so, we left each other behind. Now I am alone. Why didn’t you tell me?
No two journeys are the same, said the wind.
Some days the water was clear and sparkled with the sun. I could see clearly in all directions. Some days the sky was so dark I was afraid of what I couldn’t see. Sometimes the waves were so tall I lost my way. I was dashed against rocks and pulled under. There were days when it seemed I would never see the sun, and I didn’t think I could go on, she told the wind, her face in her hands.
But you did go on. Did you find treasure?
I did – but when I tried to carry it the weight made me sink. Why didn’t you tell me?
And did you find love? asked the wind.
The old woman smiled. I did. I thought I lost it many times, until I understood that you can’t carry it. It carries you.
The wind smiled back. So you found out. Was it worth it, then?
It was, most of the time, said the old woman. But the people I loved – so many times I had to let them go. And now my heart is broken and scarred with memories. Why would you want that to happen to me? Why didn’t you tell me it would be so hard?
I couldn’t tell you, my friend, said the wind. If I had, you never would have gone.
Thank you thank you!! 🙂
Simply beautiful.
Thank you for your kind words. 🙂
A very beautiful post by someone who “understands” life. Elegant and simple. Greg 😉
Thank you so very much! 🙂
This is gorgeous!
Not yet.
Was that a drunk rhino?
Thank you so much. 🙂 ❤
WOW, WOW, WOW!! This piece is extraordinary!! Can’t wait to share it. xo
Working now. Thanks for the heads up! 🙂
FYI – I tried to tweet using the button but it doesn’t appear to be working.
Oh, thank you so very much. 🙂
This is gorgeous.
Thank you! 🙂 🙂
Oh, this is really beautiful.
I wouldn’t listen to the mean kid in your head. I think this is great. 🙂
You did really, really well. This is a new style which works very effectively 🙂
Thank you so much, my dear friend! This is not my usual style, so I was nervous to post it.
This is gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. What lovely words. And your last thought is SO spot on! If we knew the future, we’d never get out of bed.
You are sweet. Thank you. In the original version she got eaten by a giant shark. I changed it at the last minute. 😉
*sobbing* Renee, this was exquisite. I feel like I needed to read something beautiful today and you provided it. Thank you.
Why thank you kindly my friend. Your face smells magnificent.
Holy awesome writing batman.
Thank you!!
Just wonderful. Thank you. Needed this today.
Reblogged this on An Honest Sinner and commented:
This is one of the first things I read this morning and it stunned me silent, broke my hear, made me feel like I could fly.
So much emotion and truth and I tip my hat to the writer, my astounding friend.
Much love.
Thank you so very much! 🙂
This is so awesome I am jealous! Wonderful, wonderful stuff.
Thank you so much! I appreciate the read! 🙂
Once again, another beautiful piece. Thank you for continuing to share your wonderful writing on your blog. I look forward to reading more of your work. 🙂
🙂 It reminded me a little of “footprints,” with a different message. So its ok. A close friend of mine asked if I wrote it. I’m glad you liked it. I am surely not the first to use this metaphor. (Just keep swimming) 🙂
This is going to sound weird, but just stay with me for a minute and I’ll explain. As I was reading this, I kept thinking, “This is so good! Where did she find this?” And then, as I neared the end, I realized that OF COURSE you wrote it (why else would it be here on your blog?) — and I felt foolish for not just realizing that straight away. I am super impressed with this (your writing, not my ditziness). It drew me in immediately and was just beautifully written! Thank you for sharing!
Thank you!! 🙂
I have re-blogged it. 🙂
So nice of you to share! Thank you!
Thank you! 🙂
This is beautiful! 🙂
🙂 Thank you for reading!
I couldn’t tell you, my friend, said the wind. If I had, you never would have gone. Beautiful!
Thank you! 🙂
Who would be so brave or foolish as to plunge into this journey knowing what was in store? But, here we are, swimming. reblogging
Haha! Totally see the mean kid lurking there. Looking forward to the next one.
You are not the first to wonder that. The mean kid in my head has been mocking it since I finished. Thank you very much for reading. 🙂
This is absolutely beautiful ! I wonder what drove you to write this.